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Wednesday, July 28, 2010

A WALK IN THE RAIN-II

I know not why people go crazy in the rain,
they say it eases out their heart's pain,
but the truth is simple and plain,
that the rain removes the heat not pain,
so people, start using your brains!

But I do enjoy this beauty the rain brings,
the way the drops form a ring,
I do not know whether I love the rain or not,
but I like the way this rain makes her trot,
as I get more time to view her beauty,
though I know not whether I love her truly....
 She has mesmerized me for seven years,
I know not what happens to me when she is near,
I know not why I even look at her,
but it is difficult to keep my eyes off her,
I do not understand this confusion,
can anyone suggest a solution?

I love the way she tosses her long hair,
though she is not the fairest of the fair,
and then suddenly, she looks at me,
Stop the time, thee!!
she hides from me in sheer anger,
but the sight of her still lingers.

I envy those snails; at least they get your attention,
I did listen to you with due consideration,
I still remember each and every word you said,
I never knew that such a heavy price will have to be paid.

You do not know how much I wait for you,
every single day; just to catch a glimpse of you,
I never knew that I will yearn for a girl so much,
your mere presence brightens me up.

 I finally gather the courage to talk to her,
expecting that she might placate me forever,
I admit my mistake as I get nervous,
and start walking with her as the rain gets more treacherous.

I have never seen her so still and shocked,
as if her beautiful lips have been locked,
she looks into my eyes and then away,
as her cheeks shine like a red ray.

I like the way the smile blossoms her face,
as those snails get tangled in a confused race,
I love the way her silken locks get blown away by the cool breeze,
as she slips into the conversation with a comforting ease.

I get to see the beauty of rain through her eyes,
she is not the kind to tell lies,
she is so honest and pure,
this is going to last , I will make sure.....

2 comments:

  1. Awesome.......
    every line, every stanza..its just so beautiful.. enjoyed reading :-)

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  2. Thanks Sonia!!! Its written from a guy's point of view and it was really diificult to write..

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